Saturday, November 26, 2016
Bored in chem class, Lily doodles the lyrics of her favorite song on her desk. The next day she finds that someone has written a message back to her. She writes more and the mystery writer reciprocates. Before long, they have graduated to paper letters hidden on the underside of the desk, and chemistry has become a lot more interesting for Lily. As hearts are opened and secrets spilled, Lily discovers she's attracted to the letter writer and wonders who he is. She's secretly hoping it's the guy she's been crushing over, but she fears it isn't. When she does find out who it is, she's initially shocked and offended, but gradually comes to see the letter writer in the person.
This isn't a novel suffering from subtlety. One of my least favorite things about it is the way that the story is unnecessarily dragged out as Lily turns out to be the most clueless young person on the planet. A hundred or more pages before she figures out the love of her life, we're already there and finishing our popcorn. That can be cute (smiling as you think about how excited she'll be when she figures it out), but taken this far, it grows boring and annoying.
In a different vein, her family (and her siblings in particular) annoyed me as well, but here it's all on me. Siblings are annoying and West does a wonderful job of portraying the love-hate world of a big family getting along. Lily's something of a saint amongst them, which seemed a bit too precious to me, but it otherwise sounded authentic.
I'm mixed on the romance itself. The enemies-becoming-friends thing has been done better. The initial sparring seemed mean and the explanations of how it was just misunderstandings seemed too convenient. Really, it felt like some adolescent version of "if he teases you, it's because he likes you" nonsense that I would hope that young people have long since rejected. I just didn't like the guy and couldn't really see why she would like him. That didn't make me hate the story, but it made the romance less interesting. If you don't like the guy as well as the girl, it's pretty hard to sell the reader a romance.
Saturday, November 19, 2016
That project becomes more than a place to download stories of her past. It also serves to journal her slow descent into dementia, documenting in painful detail the way that her disease affects her friendships, family, and her loved ones. In that context, the petty infighting and a potential love triangle that dominate her life will seem silly, but these things serve as a reminder that life does go on.
The novel is every bit as heart wrenching as you can imagine. At times the story falters, but the material is powerful enough to move it along. The weaknesses stem from the insurmountable issue of a heroine who gradually loses coherence as the story continues. The tension between the personal emotional growth that Sammie experiences with her physical and cognitive degeneration is difficult to parse and occasionally fails. In the end, it is really the side characters (her friends and family) who have to take over the story. The reader is forced (along with her loved ones) to let go of her. In the end, much of her story is unfinished -- which is a realistic (albeit unsatisfying) conclusion.
Friday, November 18, 2016
Years later, Scarlett thinks she has moved on. But when a young woman at her new job in an amusement park goes missing, Scarlett is forced to re-live these memories. And as the events unfold, she finds that the woman's disappearance is hardly coincidental. A face from the past has returned to haunt her. Subplots involving a love triangle and rivalries between Scarlett and her sister complicate the picture.
It pretty much all comes together in the end, but for most of the read I struggled to link it all (and it took some pretty major plot twists to get to that point!). The twists are a bit improbable and so I'm not sure I liked where we ended up, but it is a sufficiently creepy (and depressing) ending. Probably better enjoyed by the targeted young and mopey.
Friday, November 11, 2016
When Annie befriends Jessie's tormentors, the two girls are driven apart and these unspoken agendas aggravate the division. Jealousies and betrayals ensue, which are lent drama by being told in alternating narratives.
A relationship story, this is quintessential chick lit, but I still enjoyed it. It veers about a bit and there are some loose ends (the girls' relationships with their mother/stepmothers and Jessie's abuse of prescription sedatives, in particular) that I would have liked to seen reach some sort of closure. There's also an abortion clinic scene that, while powerful and interesting, felt a bit tacked on to the story.
I was happiest when the girls were just talking with each other. Their conversations felt real and the relationship complex and authentic. Lo has a very good sense for how friendships work and the way that people give and take. I also found that Lo's description of Jessie's panic attacks resonated with me quite vividly. Overall, this is an insightful and enjoyable read.
Friday, November 04, 2016
An interesting tale with a big heart and an eye for the roots of societal ills, I enjoyed the story. The biggest distraction for me was the writing itself. Stringer's background is in journalism and the writing here is very direct and to the point. While a fairly slim book, there's a lot of action here and a great deal of things happen to the characters. What we don't see much of is how they feel about those things. Madison goes through some major changes and we are told that she is upset, angry, sad, and ultimately happy, but we don't see much of her psyche. The characters, while varied and interesting, lack depth in general, making it hard to empathize with them. I liked them, but I didn't feel for them.
[Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. No other compensation was involved.]
But as she recovers from her ordeal, she finds that Connor has even darker challenges of his own. And their relationship, far from being a source of happiness for her, becomes nearly as destructive as it is healing.
While the story wraps up nicely, it meandered too much for my tastes, introducing new characters at regular intervals (seemingly simply to give Gilmore something to write about). There's the relationship with Connor, but also a sister, two very different friends, several animal adoptions, and a little dating with another boy on the side. I was hard pressed to figure out the connection between all of this and it never quite comes together.